Song Post: NeRo AnGeLo - "Identity" (Freestyle)

Soo....I was going to write some new bars to this track , (I still might lol) but at the time I just felt the need to freestyle it and vent a lil, tell me what y'all think of it....and stay tuned for a possible "official version of the song.
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New Poem: "King In The Light"

The King

The LightThe Darkness

The Prince

King In The Light

A year and a half ago I'd be all too ready to body someone lyrically

 I'd calculate every bar, punchline, simile and metaphor

 and make them hit so hard that they may feel it physically

 I'd MAKE them hate me

 I'd MAKE them have to see me as a prime target and enemy

....then I'd drop verses that'd show that they'd have no choice but to give me the victory

 my mind would be consumed with war games and schemes

 commiting arson with the pen towards any in they team

 but....I'm not that man anymore

 the one consumed by nothing but anger, rage, and hate

I'm not that man anymore

 the type ready to wild out and challenge all

 and be quick to get up in they face....

I keep saying that, but its still far too tempting...

to attempt to kill, murk, destroy

 and utterly ANNIHILATE all who oppose me

 who I know are below me

 sometimes, it honestly feel like not retaliating is phony....

but still, I hear God's voice in my ear as I write

 saying you getting listeners, but u aint doing it right

 why be a dark prince when u could be #King in the light...

why be a dark prince when u could be #King in the light.

-NeRo 

Random Thoughts At a Kickback

On one of the nites of the anniversary this preacher said that God will put things/situations/people etc in your life that will test what u have detriment in....unfortunately my detriment is patience......I've had to learn the hard way that it is something that I need to focus and work on maintaining.....God is still workin on me wit it though.....ik I'm not perfect, but I also know that's not an excuse.....so, I hope that in reading this that you also take a moment to think about the areas in your life that u may need to work on as well
Peace and much love
-NeRo